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Mike worked as (shop?) assistant during his summer vacation, and hefound a pretty girl named Jennifer on the store. He was shy at first but hefinally asked her out. He was very happy and excited about it. On the day oftheir date, he was a bit late because of traffic jams. He had come home andchanged his clothes. When he was trying to take a bus, he noticed that he hadleft his money at home! He went back home again, but his parents were out andhis house key was inside the house! He climbed the tree and got his money and thenran to the bus station. Suddenly, a police car stopped near him and thepolicemen tried to take him to the police station. He explained that he lived inthat house again and again. He was very late and Jennifer wasn’t there. She wasvery angry. He phoned her over and over again, and then he wrote a letter thatsaid “Can we start anew? Please!” But she wasn’t angry any more. They haddinner together. This book is very cute. I like love stories! They are reallyfun to read.